Take off the twilight (original poetry) [day #18]

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Take off the twilight

Sun
began to pull over
To the skyline
Some fishermen are seen
being home and some others
about to sail together The wave rate starts slowly
From the sight of several small bats began to spread
Who knows where, but bats sure sustenance is not confused.

Orange
began to wail
Take off the dusk that is getting thicker
The wind was never tired of waving nyiur
Penetrating the house - a man's house began to reflect
One - one door closed quietly, accompanied by the sound of the azan magrib echoed
Dusk increasingly dense, night increasingly meeting, slowly from the deserted sea began roaming
The smell of silence came to the house - old house at the foot of the hill and orange hue disappeared. Silence.

By; Zulkarnen, @zulacut
March 24, 2018
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Melepas senja

Matahari
mulai menepi
Menuju kaki langit
Beberapa nelayan terlihat
sedang pulang dan beberapa lainnya
hendak berlayar bersama Laju ombak mulai perlahan
Dari kejuhan terlihat beberapa kelelawar kecil mulai menyebar
Yang entah mau kemana, namun kelelawar yakin rezekinya tidak tertukar.

Jingga
mulai meratap
Melepas senja yang kian pekat
Angin pun tak pernah bosan melambaikan nyiur
Menembus kerumah – rumah manusia yang mulai termenung
Pintu satu – satu tertutup pelan, beriringan suara azan magrib bergema
Senja kian pekat, malam kian rapat, perlahan dari lautan sepi mulai bergentayangan
Aroma kesunyian hinggap kerumah – rumah tua di kaki bukit dan rona jingga menghilang. Hening.

Oleh; Zulkarnen, @zulacut
24 Maret 2018

challenging 100 days of challenging poetry on the 18th day, thanks @d-pend, also steemians friends and especially friends in steemitschool, keep the spirit.

regards
@zulacut

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