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RE: Vengeance: Chapter Two – Serialised fiction posted every Wednesday!
Hey @kaelci thank you for sharing your story and the way how you involve and encourage the readers, many people I believe dreamed and dreaming to write a bestseller book but it is not so easy as it looks like. I like the way you describe the young girl and the surroundings, it feels like there is a hard time of battle when people either survive or die. I like the way how you describe emotions, that is the most important part when we have audiobook to let our imagination work. Really nice story.
Cheers from Art supporting blog @art-venture
Thank you @art-venture! :) I try my best when it comes to my character's emotions. Much of my story is written embedded deep in the character's thoughts so their emotions are something I personally feel very deeply when writing, and I hope I manage to get the reader to feel them too.