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RE: An Essay on the Panopticon in Music and Art

At a creative writing workshop I attended many years ago, our teacher said, "it will be appropriate for readers to be in the next room while you are writing, not in the room you work." I liked that analogy as I liked the panopticon analogy. I know the audience is there, reading, and due to different beliefs, tastes some will like what I write, and some will not. Persistence is more important than anything else, I believe.

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It's very well written and it really got me thinking. I will share this with my friends to discuss this. By the way, I like how you described everything, it is noticeable that you like to write. I wish I could write like you, but I hate writing, especially that I have to write many essays for school which takes me a lot of time. This is why I use a service that edits them as I don't have time and sometimes I don't notice the mistakes I have made. This is the service https://www.topessayediting.com/ that I always use.