That was quite a long article. I have a few suggestions that would make your article better:

• Use some spaces to separate paragraphs (to enhance readability)
• Use Markdown Editing (ME) to make certain words bold so that it can be recognised as the mini-titles of certain points. If you are unfamiliar with ME, click here to learn more.

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