I think the sound effects and music you use on The Folorn Realm are really effective, I much prefer the audio version to the written version, which isn’t always the case for me.
Also, just to let you know about Steemstem curation policy, I have been told in the past they are against embedded YouTube videos. I think @katerinaramm would be someone who could let you know exactly what they expect, or check out the steemstem discord server