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RE: Mental Healing: The Secret Behind Placebos

in #stemng6 years ago

Hi @maothon. I would say that you have done a pretty good job, composing this article to educate the public regarding placebos. I might have a few suggestions for you to improve your article:

  • I know it can be difficult to create certain things such as definition, quotes from someone important and all, but you actually can take the exact sentence and put them in your article. You just need to put it in a quote box and cite its source.

  • You need to give some spaces between paragraph to make it more organised. Making a new paragraph but continuous in appearance with the previous one seems shabby.

  • Regarding the Profesor Ted screenshot; you can attach the full-length video in here instead of putting up a screenshot of him. It would be much of use for your readers to learn whatever you have learned from the video itself.

Overall, it is a good article. Kudos.

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Thanks a lot.
Adjustments will be made regarding your observations.
And as regards the videos, I referenced it back to the sources on youtube.
Thanks for the advice though. It's gonna be very helpful in consequent posts.💪