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RE: The Shadows of Stars (Short Story)

Oh, I didn't mean it that way! The descriptions of "heat" and "lush" were to describe the setting--in savannas, summer storms are quite common and the rain is warm. "Throbbing" refers to the vitality of the woman and the thrumming of the rain on the ground. For the overgrowth, I was referring to the light invading her privacy.

Thank you for reading @swissclive! This was a fun exercise!

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LOL. Maybe you should write “steamy” novels, or should I say “steemy” novels?

Haha, that's not too bad of an idea! I don't know how that kind of material might be received here, though.