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RE: The Quest - A Choose Your Own Adventure Story - Part 2
Hi, I found your story through @terminallyill's contest.
Very well written, and Padrun makes for nice comic relief. In part 1, I think the story sounded too serious before he showed up, and now he's gone again. I would like to see more of him. I just hope he doesn't turn out to be an enemy later (you know, feigning clumsiness, having Exferlin gather all the powerful items, and then...). And I'm curious about the Thief.
As for the choice... leaving unaccompanied sounds like more trouble to me. So, the third option's out. Since I'm unfamiliar with the setting and don't know what dangers await in either destination, I'll just pick the first option: to Myth Arnor.
Thank you @aiyumi. Rest assured, you have not seen the last of Padrun the Magnificent. The first two choices are meant to be made blind and each has its rewards... As well as consequences. Thanks for reading and I'll have the next installment ready on the March 9.