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RE: Laura Ebert - Part 1 - Insanity

in #story6 years ago

Wow! What a well written and captivating story, it sounded ao much like a true story, thanks for the tags else I would have mistaken it for a true story...

It's crazy how things escalated between the character and Laura, I definitely wasn't expecting that to happen at all, I wanted to know more about Laura's story too but I didn't see her in that light. I only saw her as a woman who was judged and treated unfairly by society...

While she really was treated unfairly, that strange act of hers probably was what pushed people away from her. I would have loved to read more about her husband, or did they separate after the incident?

I love how subtle the horror in the story is, it creeps in gently and takes over without even realizing...

Great story!

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I worked quite hard on trying to make it realistic and to put the horror in subtly! Thank you for your comment!