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RE: Into the Dreaming: Chapter One "Collin" (Fantasy Y/A Novel)
Oh yeah, no need to comment but just making sure you didn't miss the second half of the prologue- an important detail in that one :)
Oh yeah, no need to comment but just making sure you didn't miss the second half of the prologue- an important detail in that one :)
Answering the previous comment, I extrapolated it from Collin thinking he'd be perfectly fine and happy living on his own if not for the law, and also the reiterations of basically "trust no one" XD
And on this one, I tend to notice things no one else does and miss the things that are blatantly obvious ;D