The story plunges you deep into the action....I can imagine the story going along..the characters, namely and Andy moving from distrust to friendship, and from friendship to love....

Its a good story, but you might want to consider your punctuation and grammer. The character pronouns seem mixed up, and make it difficult understanding and follow the story, especially for those who are not very good at reading.

His (Her) life is going nowhere until he (she) meets Andy Cornholder, a hot, dark man with a passion for sex.

Amanda takes an instant disliking to (of/for) Andy and the mean and demon ways he learnt during his years in church.

......blowjob to try an (and) distract himself (herself), i think because Amanda is a female!