The story turned out magnificent. I read it "in one go." The main thing is that from this story we can learn several important life lessons. This allows the reader to receive useful information and to receive the benefit of reading.

I liked how the dialogs are spelled out. You did it in an interesting way. Thanks to the dialogues we learn a lot about the relationship of the grandmother and Timothy. Some (judging by the comments) interpreted this as a communication between parents and children. With this, he is inclined to agree. Moreover, the main lesson to be learned from reading is parental love, which can manifest itself in various forms. Even if they shout at you, they do it because they want to protect you or warn you. Also, children are really inquisitive and this is normal. Moreover, we must help children to seek answers to their questions. Any parents should contribute to the development of the child.

The story impressed me. It makes you think and this is important. I had a pleasant experience. Thank you