I liked the reading, though. For me it's too long. I have a small screen and these writings make my neck very tired while I'm reading. Can you divide it into two or three parts? pleeease...
Speaking of the story itself, of course, you can observe science, science fiction and human reflections. You are slowly developing the idea of the end of the earth but with the possibility of reversal. I've read these narratives before, the interesting thing about you is that you write with a pause and that's very nice because the end of the narrative comes without surprises. For me the end of this story is beautiful!
It's been a great pleasure reading you @stillgideon