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RE: The Satchmo P.I. - Living Amongst Monsters – Chapter 3
I want to resteem it and I feel that at some places, there is less emphasis required. If you can check it critically again, it would be nice :)
This is my suggestion. If you agree, then you can change
Cool, I'll have look and let you know when edited.
There we go :) All done. I removed the doubles and changed one exclamation with a fullstop. Typing on my phone now so lemme know what you think :):)
Great :)