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RE: Chapter One: The Beginning

in #story • 7 years ago

I can't say that I'm safe now I'm dead as this place is similar to the living world which means it's just as dangerous.

A cliffhanger like this and I have to wait 'til monday!? Oh please have mercy and write sooner :3

I like your writing! ^^ On occasions there's a comma missing that made me re-read the sentence twice; but I love it! I look forward to the next part :D

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks for the lovely comment and advice! Commas have never been my fortay haha but I'll try and fix them up for next week! :)

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     7 years ago 

    Next week

    Noooo! I can't wait that longggg :p

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