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RE: Using an Android 4.4.4 smartphone in 2018

in #technology7 years ago (edited)

The Android OS is a mobile operating system developed by Google, based on a modified version of the Linux kernel and other open source software and designed primarily for touchscreen mobile devices such as smartphones and tablets.

  • The statement above should be written in a quoted box since you've taken an exact word-by-word definition from Wikipedia. It's good that you link the definition to the original source but it would be neater if it is put in a quote box.

  • Even if you have quoted every single source by embedding the article's link to a few sentences, you still need to list up our references at the end of your article.

  • You have some issues with your images, apart from what is yours, the second image can't be used because it is copyrighted while the third image was not properly credited.

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  • The statement above was taken from the source of your 2nd image. Unless you have obtained written permission, you weren't allowed to use the picture.

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Thank you very much for your detailed observations. I'll effect the changes as you have pointed out.
Could you please give me a sample of how I should properly credit an image to it's source as you said in your second observation?

You can click here. It will bring you to an article which I made a couple of months ago regarding the subject.