I identify a good writer when he makes good use of metaphors. I think metaphors are the opportunity to show intelligence, and your metaphor of "The skin was not very wrinkled, but wavy, like dry water on a page of a book" shows your potential. "Her hands swung by her sides, like puppets, not with cut strings, but with a dead puppeteer" This is another excellent metaphor, it is brilliant. Sometimes I feel that reading is a kind of obligation, but this time it has been a pleasant and wonderful experience. Of course not being able to remember things is quite scary. The way in which you have armed the story, including the love between sisters, is very penetrating. I congratulate you, sincerely. Pleased to have read you. Greetings.