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RE: Banged up in an Indian hospital!

in #travel • 7 years ago

Somewhere tonight I think I saw you ask about whether this piece worked if written in 2nd person voice. (Don't make me go back and discover where I saw this. Please!!) I'm here to say I am not a fan of 2nd person voice usually, however this one works splendidly!! It makes your reader part of the action ... it makes him / her experience exactly what happened to you in ways I don't think you could achieve otherwise.

This piece would lose a lot of its power if you put it in another voice. This one works nicely. You did a great job with it.

The-STEEM-Engine

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     7 years ago (edited)

    Thanks! You must have seen this in the Steem Engine's post promotion channel on Discord. 2nd person can be a bitch to work with, but I think imagining yourself violently ill is probably something most people can relate to. It's not something I'm gonna do regularly, but I'm glad it worked here.

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      That's gotta be it. I'm the curator there. (Gonna find a home for this one somewhere. Count on it.)

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