FLAME OF LOVE

in #trending • 7 years ago

O flame of living love
How tender you are
Of my soul in the deepest center!
Well, you're not dodging anymore
Finish now if you want
Break the fabric of this sweet encounter!

Oh cauterius süave!
Oh, what a treat!
O soft hand! Oh delicate touch
That eternal life knows
And all debt paid!
Killing, death in life you have bartered.

Oh Fire Lamps
In whose blazes
The deep caverns of meaning,
Which was dark and blind,
With strange strangers
Color and light together with your beloved!

How meek and loving
You remember me
Where you secretly only live,
And in your tasty suck
Of good and full glory,
How delicately you make me in love

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     7 years ago 

    Hi Zubin!
    Just took a look at your page... here is my honest feedback to support you getting the most out of this platform.

    1. Be sure to post your own original photos with each post, or at least a photo that you show where it came from.
    2. Sign your poems so we know they are from you!
    3. Make longer headings for your posts, explain a bit about why the post is important to you in the tittle. (This one was named "flame of love" but you can also say--"Flame of Love : A poem about my beloved " or something like that.
    4. use more pictures and make longer posts, add a description about your poem and what it means to you, or what inspired you to write it. give us more is what i mean :) we want more! lol
    5. comment on others content with your feedback and get involved in the conversations rather than asking for help or seeking upvotes. being a part of the community in an active way is so helpful for everyone! this will also show us if your someone we want to support, because we get to know you and what you say to others about their posts.
    6. use some variation in the way your posts appear. try learning the different codes for making your words bold, or centered, or italicized to make it more interesting to look at. For instance, to center something on your post use this code without spaces < center > your poem goes here < / center >
    7. introduce yourself! make a post to explain who you are and what you do, and what you are doing on steemit! tag it with introduceyourself ... we are all looking to support the newbies!
    8. tag 5 things in each post for topics. Here you tagged only 4, trending, hot, new, and love. I would tag it with labels that are more relevant. Love or Poem as your first and second tag, and then Life, Writing, and Art for instance.

    That's all I've got for now! Hope this is helpful and you consider these as useful strategies to express yourself on here!

    MUCH LOVE,
    @jacquelyne

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     7 years ago 

    Thnx @jacquelyne I'm highly thankful to you for ur valuable suggestions. I will try my best to modify my way of expressing. Thnx a lot

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