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RE: Peer Query core open source release, what you can do with the platform and more

in #utopian-io6 years ago

We at Utopian are always delighted when an app or a service goes open source. More cool stuff to support!

I did have a couple of issues with this post, however, both in regards to content and presentation.

On the content side, the post presumes significant pre-existing knowledge on the side of readers. A more comprehensive explanation of what Peer Query does and how it does it would have made the post more accessible to those new to the platform.

On the presentation side, there were issues of style and grammar, as well as a shortage of graphical illustrations. I'll cite a couple of examples of those style and grammar issues.

  • "It is free to create a project, and you can create as many projects as you want." This is a style issue. It would be clearer as "Creating a project is free, and you can create as many as you want." This avoids both the duplication of "project/projects" and the confusion of "it is free" as the start of a sentence.

  • "We will soon as many new features for projects." I think this may be a proofreading issue? The word "as" should obviously be "have," and I guess it may have been left over in an edit?

Issues such as these make the post a little harder to read, and I would urge greater attention to them going forward.

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totally my bad; edited the areas you highlighted. thanks

Thank you for your review, @didic!

So far this week you've reviewed 15 contributions. Keep up the good work!