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RE: Hede.io Series: What Is Hede.io And How To Get Started.

in #utopian-io • 6 years ago

This post is a fairly thorough introduction to Hede.io. However, it included very little that one could not find on materials previously published by Hede.io and others. I really wish you would have included more of your own experience with the project, and I hope you plan on doing so in future posts in the series.

I would also note that the post could be improved in terms of style, grammar, and proofreading. I'd be happy to provide examples of these issues in a follow-up comment, if you wish.

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     6 years ago 

    I would be glad if you do so.

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      Examples ahoy!

      I am certain most of us would have had some sort of history with sites where you are required to give the meaning of words or terms in your own words, or in your neighborhood speech.

      To start, this sentence is very long and needlessly convoluted. It also contains "neighborhood speech," which is not a term.

      The excellence of this is you get the chance to characterize those terms any way you need it,

      That's not how you use "excellence." I would write something such as "The great thing about this." Also, "need" is not the correct word. There's no need here. There's "want." And it's "any way you want to."

      far from the typical 'exhausting' definitions you can discover in the word references.

      In what way are official definitions exhausting? And why is the word in quotes? Did you mean "exhaustive"? I would also write "find," not "discover."

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       6 years ago 

      Thanks, I will correct that in my next post.

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         6 years ago 

        Thank you for your review, @didic!

        So far this week you've reviewed 20 contributions. Keep up the good work!

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