RE: Introducing Sprtshub.io - Episode 1
Thank you for your contribution, and for introducing this service.
I had some issues with the post, in regards to both content and presentation.
On the content side, we expect significant editorial content for Utopian Blog category posts. Your post was entirely made up of information easily available elsewhere. What was your experience with Sportshub? What made it a good experience? Where is it lacking?
Also, there are factual issues. "We all know that you can log in to any Dapp on the Steem Blockcain with Steemconnect" is something I wish were true, but is not. There dApps that require that you put in your Steem credentials. Also, I just tried the sign up process myself, and there a step you missed. After logging in with Steemconnect, it wanted my email, and asked that I agree with the terms and conditions. This is standard, of course, in many sites. But there was no link to the terms and conditions. I didn't complete my sign up.
Finally, there are issues with the presentation, in the areas of style and grammar.
"Most people never loved or had a passion for their at first" confused me. "for their" what? Job? Hobby?
"You get to read Sports new on the platform also." I think you meant "sports news"?
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Thank you for your review, @didic!
So far this week you've reviewed 30 contributions. Keep up the good work!