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RE: You like something(content) on Youtube, you can download it with; NewPipe.
Thanks for your review @tykee. Please I'd appreciate if you cited examples of the errors in my post. Thanks.
Thanks for your review @tykee. Please I'd appreciate if you cited examples of the errors in my post. Thanks.
There are many issues in the post, but I will cite a few.
I ‘’decided to begin’’ is extraneous. You could say: ‘’I began a series about some Youtube downloaders I’ve used.’’
A little bit is redundant. A little or a bit, choose one.
Readability could be improved with: ‘’So I assume it to be performing two functions.’’
Another tautology. Reason and why.
Here, the second sentence is a fragment with excessive words. That could read as: I said NewPipe’s UI is great, especially because it had dark themes.