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RE: Unique Android Apps : Episode 1A (Do more with QKSMS) Cont'd

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Hello, @princekelly!

Thank you for your contribution. Your post is very informative and well-illustrated with quality screenshots. Keep up the good work.

On the content side, you did a really good job once again. I like all the information provided, and I appreciate the fact that you took the time to share your personal knowledge and views. You also gave a thorough analysis of the features mentioned in your review, and I certainly enjoyed reading your post.

That said, there were issues of style and proofreading. In conclusion, I think that you did a good job. I look forward to reading the next part of this series.

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Thank you, I try to improve this proofreading and style. Any advice @lordneroo?

Hello there!

Most of the proofreading issues I spotted in your text are related to the incorrect use of punctuation marks. When used incorrectly, punctuation makes communication confusing. For instance:

The backup and restore function on this app, makes it possible for me to keep essential texts.

No need to use a comma there. There is no subordinate clause, appositive, or other special situation calling for a comma. This would be much better: "The backup and restore function on this app makes it possible for me to keep essential texts.''

Furthermore, as mentioned in my review, there were issues of style. For example:

I occasionally make quick format on my device to remove junks and lose files saved in the internal storage of my device.

This sentence should read: ''I occasionally format my device in order to remove junk files and delete files saved in the internal storage of my device.

I hope you find this comment helpful.

Have a great day!

@lordneroo, sorry am replying late. Thank you for the feedback, I will definitely look into it.

Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!