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RE: [Tutorial] Create Our Own Discord Bot (Part 3) - Registry functions

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Thank you for your contribution. Below is our review:

  • Discord bots are certainly exciting to work with and quite useful.
  • You mentioned there were 3 items to be taught in the tutorial, yet you used points 1 and 2. Combining last 2 items under 1 point is confusing.
  • Your code had barely any comments, which makes it difficult to comprehend or maintain in the future
  • You did not explain your code quite efficiently to your readers. Explaining code properly would help readers learn better.
  • You have some English language issues in your content, try to improve those and re-read your post before submitting it.
  • I believe you had used a wrong variable usuariox in here which is not yet defined, the correct variable would be usuario. Why use confusing almost similar variable names? msg.author.getDMChannel().then(channel => channel.createMessage('to register '+usuariox +' please execute in this chanel (direct message) $privatekey yourprivatekey || para registrar '+ usuariox +', ejecute en este canal (mensaje directo) $privatekey privatekey para saber donde esta su privatekey , vea el video '));

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Thank you for your review, @mcfarhat!

So far this week you've reviewed 2 contributions. Keep up the good work!