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RE: Screen Stream: One Of The Best Screen Sharing App

in #utopian-io5 years ago

Thank you for your contribution. The screen stream is a cool project, and it is nice to see it get some attention.

It is good that you used the app before writing about it, but I still couldn't get something new in this publication. I have read a few reviews about the screen stream app, and the contents are quite similar to this one. Also, I think the theme is a minor feature in most application. Reading about theme options often is getting boring. If you wish to talk about it in your post, try to make it very short. 15-20 words are enough. Focus more on the aspect that will provide more value for readers.

On the presentation, I don't like how the images slated on the side of the blog. I think it would have been better if you had placed them in the center. This simple HTML markdown should fix it. <center>Image</center>

Further, the post had some proofreading issues. There are quite a few hard to read sentences. An additional edit pass might have helped significantly.

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Thank you @tykee for your review. Your corrections are noted and I hope not to repeat them in my next contribution.
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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!