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RE: Battery charge limit v1.1.1 - Stop charging at the desired level # Part1

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Hi, thank you for your contribution. The post is extensive. However, I have a few issues with it.

First, you used a collective word ‘we’ incorrectly. You are the only one reviewing the project. I will review the Battery limit application; sounds better. The post does not contain significant, and unique information about the project. You were repeating the same information on every section of the post. Also, it is necessary to cite images that are not your mobile screenshots. If some of the visuals are from your mobile device, what about the Root image?

Last, the post had grammar issues. There are unclear sentences, which made the post hard to understand. I would advise you to work on your English. Some grammar checking apps could help to improve your writing. Try Grammarly paid version and Hemingway.

Thank you!

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!