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RE: Gamify Steemit's future Soft/Hard Forks testing - The SteemCommunity Organization
Thank you! I agree with you, it is hard to never let this happen again. But it is a goal we would like to work on. There was a saying, which fits well here :)
“Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.” by Norman Vincent Peale.
Please do write some examples on how I can improve, because I would like to improve my writing skills as well.
I often say "perfect is a goal, not a destination," so we are in agreement. Now, to the examples!
The word "have" is redundant. It makes the sentence present perfect, and it should be simple past: "I logged in."
A few issues here. Starting with that redundant "and" at the start, which I guess may have been left over from a different form of the sentence? There's also no punctuation. Punctuation is good!
Whose own testnet? @gtg's? All of yours? Also, again, punctuation. Let's do a sample edit:
"@gtg, the wizard of Steemit, proposed making our own TESTNET. He stated that it is not needed only for hard forks." (A comment here: I guessed at @gtg's gender based on Gandalf being male. I would have considered using the singular they if it were my post and I didn't know the gender).
Let's make this simpler and more accurate: "So that future hard/soft forks are bulletproof before implementation."
Thanks a lot for your effort @didic. Very good advice. Will try to improve!