The Exchange - Writers Block Poetry Contest Week 3

in #wbpoetrycontest7 years ago (edited)

The Escape
Inspired by "The Exchange" by Alicia Ostriker)
#twbpoetrycontest

I see a woman sitting on the steps
Of the New York City Public Library, her borrowed
Book, Anna Karenina open in her lap, “each unhappy
family is unhappy in its own way.” She does not strain to see. She keeps

Her head down, tucking her hair behind her ear.
The smell from the street vendors penetrates
The air -- smoky, gray, salty. A red and yellow fire truck pushes
Through the city traffic. No one notices.

If our eyes meet, our gaze pulls us, one into the other,
Frightened, frustrated, she will shatter my magnifier
And tear the pages from the large print street map.
Eyes foggy, she takes my things, crosses the street.

When she looks up at the schedule board at Grand Central, she
Sees only a wordless wall, numbers and names
Blurring together. Her diseased eyes will shed
Tears, one for each destination

Unseen. She will not know which way to
Turn. Her fear of what’s to come paralyzes her,
And I, having exchanged with her, will sit on
The steps, reading, waiting for Anna to jump.

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really loved this poem! hope you'll keep submitting to the contest :)

You have been followed. I hope to see more exciting contents on this page. Let her not jump. Please let her sit with me in the cold. And maybe. If we become nice to one another we would invoke the warmth of our delicate flesh to keep up through the cold menace. Lovely!

This is wonderful. I read it twice. And I loved it even more. :)

Thank you! I am visually impaired so it was an emotional poem for me to write.

Good work, @meco, and congratulations on your TWB win. This line lingers for me:

If our eyes meet, our gaze pulls us, one into the other

Thanks so much!

This is beautiful my love!

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