I just came upon this, and I must say it's the most invaluable writing advice I've had on steemit so far. I'm a budding writer, and I can relate with the wish to write something so awe-inspiring people have no other choice but to like. Writing is a process; an expansion of a simple, niggling idea into something so big and beautiful. In writing, you create your world, complete with characters who fit into this world, norms and all. Staying true to yourself as a writer, and appreciating constructive criticism is the only way to improve. Well done. Nice piece.