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RE: Read on to find out how the 3-part-prompt is formed into ONE story (a twist at the 3rd part) | Weekend Freewriting

in #writing7 years ago

I enjoyed the emotional build up in the end, you ended the story with a bang. The way she felt the ultimate betrayal at the end. I enjoyed reading this.

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Thank you @abmakko for reading and leaving a thoughtful comments.