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RE: Fresh Start …Finale ...The Advent of the Unexpected

in #writing5 years ago

The twist about the souls, it was clever, but I liked the way you used it to cement the relationship of Mar and Jess...

And for us, grief has become a place and a person…and now it’s a memory we both share.

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Thanks, Arthur - always a good comment or observation :)