That was a pleasure to read. I thoroughly enjoyed the ramp-up to the edge, where we all sit and wait... what will we see on the other side? Will they live? Only time can tell... Same @grocko Time, Same @grocko Channel.
Honestly, good use of words and rhythm. It has a nice flow to it.
Thank you, thank you.
Part 3 will be up tonight, and it's longer than both these parts. Perhaps too long, might have to shorten it down a smidge. :)