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     6 years ago (edited)

    believe it or not the entire purpose behind this story was to be less cryptic and more approachable lol (it appears i've failed [or more accurately also forgot] ).

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       6 years ago 

      Oh my goodness, you're a human. Alright, now I'm actually curious about -how- you managed this piece. It seems so AI ... Interesting.

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         6 years ago (edited)

        If there was any chance of me remembering what state and/or class of intoxication at the time of writing I'd let you know, but I don't remember.

        I wrote it like everything I write (bursts of 5-15 mins stream of consciousness that sometimes works sometimes turns out like this)

        I was actually going for a really cold robotic tone for this character so this comment makes me kinda happy

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         6 years ago 

        Well that's kind of awesome. I have a similar process for the Etaletai music. We may as well promote to one another eh? Haha, I dig the story.

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           6 years ago 

          Sure thing. I've been thinking about giving music yet another try, expressing joy, fun and irreverence in a literary setting is proving difficult (shit always turns out too mean or too crazy)

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           6 years ago 

          Personally I've found irreverence just as difficult in life. By that I mean I'm entirely too mean, and crazy.

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