RE: Original Flash Fiction: Into the Woods

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RE: Original Flash Fiction: Into the Woods

giddyupngo (57)in #writing • 6 years ago

Thanks @cyemela for the feedback, I edited the ending after reading your comment to make it more clear. I meant that Sharon was paid $20 to sign up to be in the talent pool. She was selected for a scene unknowingly, and for that she will receive an additional 25K. I didn't mention the director's pay. Thanks for the feedback!

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f3nix (59) 6 years ago

I think that it's very clear and a clever twist. This, a bit more developed, could definitely be a "black mirror" episode. Very clever idea Gid (and cheers to your second curie! This contest takes you luck ;-) bravo!).

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cyemela (63) 6 years ago

@giddyupngo gets my vote for this weeks Finish the Fiction contest.

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f3nix (59) 6 years ago

I know.. he's got the idea. I'm here stuck not knowing what to choose.

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