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RE: Ash Falls at Dawn: Chapter I

in #writing5 years ago

Gripping story.
Imagine how shocked I was when I approached your post, half-sleepy still, a bit disturbed because of a nightmare I had just waken up from.
At a very well known traffic light in my town I was looking around, waiting for a bus, I guess, got distracted by a known face on a motorcycle when a big crash made me turn the other way. A truch had just crashed against a group of people. the bodies were spread all over, but they did not look human. the truck was one of these refrigerating things and all of a sudden it was turned over by a mob.
out of the truck came what seemed like chickens, but they were not frozen, they looked strangely human, slimy and pale.
People around started to eat from them and the contorted bodies of the injured ones combined with the canibalistic scene made me wake up started.
And then I read your story!