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This was so touching. Such beautiful literature with vivid imagery. I could feel the bullets whirl pass my ears. Keep writing, buddy. I follow you.

Thank you so much for the comment. I really appreciate it.

Well done @jasonbu! Thank you for sharing the story with us. Is this based in a particular existing Sci-Fi Universe? Or one of your own creation?

Thanks, nothing from an existing base, just a conglomerate of ideas that I mushed together... But it certainly could be the basis for something... Off to start jotting notes :-)

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