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RE: Alexis Daimon, A Slave in Space — Erotic BDSM Sci-Fi Novella — Chapter 7 (Serialized)

in #writing7 years ago

Thank you for sharing and posting this. I love your writing and feel like I'm in those clean sheets swimming my skin against them like Alexis.

The description of her feelings captivate me. I liked the simile about fear gripping like a metal band.

Does space travel exist for Alexis? Like is it a rare thing in her reality?

I can't wait to see more. I also can't wait to read it in full!

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Thank you :) I'm definitely writing this as I go along, but yes, space travel does exist for her! I guess I need to do a chapter that focuses a little more on the world building--that sounds like fun.

I just get so carried away with the, ahem, juicier bits and action scenes that I tend to forget about the importance of having those other details in there to enhance the experience ;)