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RE: Hellcat | The Chronicles of Enasni | 4

in #writing7 years ago

That's a great short story! Trouble is I have to edit it when reading it to my husband because little pitchers have big ears and the swearing is high level. However, the whole thing is excellently written and fun to read. I laughed and felt embarrassed in sympathy.

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Thanks so much. Unfortunately the swearing is an extremely accurate portrayal of true events. This story was previously published in the Medical Post in Canada but I included it in the series because it is part of the storyline of Enasni

Actually I think you are right that the f words are a bit crude. Have done a few edits to smooth it out a bit for family viewing, Thanks

Thank you so much! Yes, I run into the f-words quite a bit...and as realistic as your story was written out, I didn't think you threw it in gratuitously. But I do really appreciate the edits. Keep writing! You have a great touch with storytelling.