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RE: The Runaway Tram Part 2 The Red Boots Diary

in #writing6 years ago

An excellent read. I found myself in the shoes of Richard, experiencing this life-defining moment as he did. Your writing clearly conveys the nuances of meeting someone intriguing for the first time, as well as that of burgeoning love.

Cheers!

~ Mako

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thanks for your response