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RE: Plagued lives - part ? of ?

in #writing5 years ago

In Venezuela there is a saying: writes that something is...
In my opinion you have a great narrative pulse. Everything is in its right place and one begins to read you and we reach the end wanting to continue reading.
I loved. He might have wanted "more stops" before following Faylake. A big hello @ivanm7

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Thank you for reading still!