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RE: Blues for Nick Moss (poem)

in #writing • 7 years ago (edited)

I like the rhythm you have built with this poem. It is in prose, but it has a swinging to it like blue jazz. I am not good at ending verses unless I am writing with concrete structure and a rhyme scheme. I am sure you can figure a way to close it though. 😊

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks @mr-bike! I will keep at it. You should, too :)

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