I like your posts. Very helpful for someone who is new to writing. I don't believe I have a problem with bloated words. I think my issue is the opposite and vocabulary is too limited. Thanks for the post! Following for more great advice.

I started posting one of my original stories and I am looking for other fiction lovers to comment and critique. There are a lot of amazing writers on here and I would love any advice. Feel free to check out my story - In the Lonely Hour