When we were born it must have been a chaotic day, full of anxieties, fears and fluctuating sensations, you described everything perfectly as it happened to you yesterday... or maybe it is true that every new day is a new birth... your writing is very effective because you have the ability to read the thoughts of the protagonist and you make him talk directly with the reader, truly impressed
Thank you so much, you're so kind. I just like to look at babies and guess what they could be thinking. Like, they probably laugh when we make them faces because we look stupid hahaha. Nah, in reality, it's just that, they haven't see anything, they haven't even breather air when they come out to the world, everything is obviously a shock. And the only thing they know by instinct is the voice of their mothers because they have heard her the last 9 months. So that should be familiar and therefore safe.