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RE: BANDING MINNOWS (SCIENCE FICTION)- CHAPTER TWO

in #writing6 years ago

Thank you for sharing this sci-fi story, love the idea of AI in our routine daily life. That makes everything much easier for us. great build up tension while count down, every second the reader himself tries to speed Gladys up to look for the batteries. I was glad she was able to fly away and now she has a new person she met Danny, would be interesting to learn about him more :)

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Yea. Thanks for your feedback. Much appreciated. More chapters to come... :)