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RE: Mistress of Magic: Morgan's First Apprentice - Chapter 2 - Reunion in the Palace

in #writing • 7 years ago

I don't know either. It's why I have the spectacular editors of @isleofwrite . If they say it's okay, it's okay. English is not my first language, so I need all the editing help I can get.

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     7 years ago 

    I hesitated over that one (I'm an Isle of Write editor)
    I'm a fan of dumping a, and, the, and stuff, whenever possible, and lately I've been reading way more poetry than usual.
    The guidebook: If readers trip over it, maybe you should add the indefinite article to make it definitive. :)

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    Ok, I've decided: either it held different meanings, or it held a different meaning.
    But "held different meaning" does sound unorthodox.
    Good call, @evilist-fiend