You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Jewel of the Harem: Chapter 1 - The Capture of Mei

in #writing • 6 years ago

Awesome. That was an absurdly quick submission on the part of Mei, lol. Then again, her marriage was very sexually deprived. And that was also too gentle a barbarian hahah. Whenever I think of an abduction like this, it goes more like the Rape of Nanking.

6 years ago in #writing by
$0.00
    1 vote
    Reply 1
    Sort:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
     6 years ago 

    Thanks for the feedback. :-)
    Mostly, i think the only reason the barbarian is so gentle is because Mei submitted so quickly. He shows in Chapter 2 that He can be rough, and He will show that again in Chapter 5. Most of the scenes where He is "barbaric" will be in His treatment of other men though, or of rebellious girls.
    i'll check out that link you sent though.

    $0.00
      Reply