To_42 Narration on Youtube

I think it is fantastic to learn about new creators and to learn more about them. I just found out about To_42 and DarkhorseTales. Here's my summary of To_42's latest story.

1.  Summary
   

There are three main stories and three short stories in this video. Story one named "Sheryl's always trying to prove that looks don't matter." In this story, Sheryl tries to prove to everyone that she doesn't go for looks.
Story Number two was "Personal Test." In this story, the writer was up late in the night on his computer answering personal, trivial questions based on personality. When he got his result, he realized that he was not alone. Story number three, "Art to die for," in this story, there was an enthusiastic young artist who was determined to become the best. Unfortunately, in the search for greatness, a set of paintbrushes made them meet their doom.

1.  What I liked about it
   

These were exciting stories that engaged the audience and captured their attention for the span of twenty-five minutes straight. In addition, these stories have unique diversities which intrigued audience of all types.

1.  What Was Missing
   

I felt these stories lacked consistency. The audience who were not watching but listening would not know where the story starts and ends, which I find to be the most significant missing piece.

1.  My Message to the Narrator
   

I want to congratulate the narrator on compiling an exciting video that has captivated the audience through a visual and audio format which I, as an audience, liked. However, I would advise the narrator that their speech was slow-paced; some audience members might find it uncomfortable. My other point would be they should work on their transitions between the stories.