My Monster [Original Poetry Collaboration]

in #yu7 years ago (edited)

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Frankenstein's monster
has got nothing on mine
Knees rooted in sorrow
Fire molten and melting down her neck
Smoke instead of a soul
Caught between
the parenthetical of disappointment
the hyphen
of spiteful jokes
Everyone talks about abuse
like it's a new flavor of creme in their coffee
Little do they know
that they are pulling the strings


My second poem inspired by the great poetry from @yusaymon's post, for @inquiringtimes contest. The first one is located here. This is all part of a contest for Yusaymon month- go check out his work! Huge shout-out to the poetry workshops at both MSP and the Writers Block for giving feedback on this poem, especially @geke @crimsonclad and @writerofthings.
Edit note: Originally I cited this image as belonging to Yusaymon- I was incorrect and have edited it to cite the correct artist.


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Art is property of Klarem
Poetry is property of Sunravelme

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WOW my friend this is Amazing!!! <3 <3

Thank you! All made possible by your beautiful art :)

That´s not my art only the poetry in my post but I feel a mix of emotion with you poetry Bro !! Thanks for being so awesome <3 <3 <3 <3

Congratz, is an instresting poem :)

The photo what got me blown away...
Awesome...Interesting combination and great strength of colour...

Check out Klarem on deviantart- he is the original artist. All of his work is fantastic!

Nice collab sunravelme :) The poem is such a nice compliment to the art!

Thank you! The workshops have really improved my writing in general- plus it's so fun to finally have someone to talk shop with!

Simply put... This is beautiful. I upvoted and followed. And because i liked it so much i also resteemed. Keep it up. Looking forward to reading more.

Right in the feelers. I like this one a lot too.

Thank you- I have stopped mining some of my older poetry and started writing some new. Although this has been cannibalized a bit from some of my older stuff.

Really fun! I like the writing and the art. Very inspiring :)

Beautiful poem, dear. I love your imagery here!
Smoke instead of a soul

Caught between
the parenthetical of disappointment
the hyphen
of spiteful jokes

Love both the poem and the artwork! Wow!