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RE: Take a Chance, pt. 9 (a five-minute #freewrite)
I'm thinking of doing a proper story with these two, plot and all. Though I think Jenny would be less.......... uptight in that case. Still easily exasperated, just less bitchy about it. Both of them loved! Joey's always lovable, she will at least be likeable.
Ideas!!!!
(Thanks for prompt delivery!)
I think she's loveable now! She irascible for sure, but who wouldn't be with a good-natured guy trying every trick imaginable to antagonize or terrify them? That she keeps going along knowing is loveable. The scenes are always surprising and engaging.
plot and all
I'm enjoying them as little bits, and enjoying too wondering how on earth it has come to this.